To start off, I love how you had the dress up in the air and in motion, it gives it some substance that I would love to see elaborated on. One thing I would work on is how her mouth and face is positioned; maybe tilt her head down a bit and less strained. Overall I love how you captured the scene, her legs in the position they are in and the overall fashion of her attire and how her hair is stylized. Keep up the great work, as I saw your other photographs from the shoot and was pretty impressed. Thank you for your vision.